• Episode 256 - Cast Breakdown - Nobody Wants This
    Dec 23 2024

    In this episode, Jeff and several of the Dialoggers discuss the Netflix romantic comedy, Nobody Wants This. They talk about the cast, how the personalities interact, and how we can use the VEAH System (Vehicles, Engines, Anchors, and Hazards) to build our own casts that work. For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/

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    1 hr and 18 mins
  • Episode 255 - Time with Tom
    Dec 16 2024

    In this episode, Tom Holbrook returns for another Time with Tom. In this episode, Tom and Jeff break down their favorite stories recently, talk about the difference and similarities between fiction and non-fiction editing, and Tom shares some huge news.

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    1 hr and 12 mins
  • Episode 254 - Understanding the Tools to Write Emotion
    Dec 9 2024

    In this episode, Jeff sits down with author Lisa Bonneau to look at the story she is working on. Lisa comes to the session with three questions:

    1. How to increase the emotional tension of a scene?
    2. 2. How to create more artistic sounding body language?
    3. 3. When to add body language into a piece?

    In response, Jeff breaks down how emotions work on the page and the different tools we as writers have to enhance or diminish them.

    Jeff, Laura, and JP are available to book for coaching sessions at https://dialoguedoctor.com/

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    1 hr and 15 mins
  • Episode 253 - Publishing with Emily Barrosse
    Dec 2 2024

    In this episode, Jeff interviews Emily Barrosse from Bold Story Press. They discuss Emily's 32 years in the publishing industry, how she has seen publishing evolve, her advice for new writers entering the industry, her passion for publishing female voices, and much more.

    To find Emily and Bold Story Press, go to https://www.boldstorypress.com/

    For more on the craft of writing, go to https://dialoguedoctor.com/

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    1 hr
  • Episode 252 - Character Growth in Paranormal Romance
    Nov 25 2024

    In this episode, Laura Humm sits down for an Ask Me Anything session with author Julie Catherine. They talk about using different plot frameworks across a series, how a character grows across a series, points of view in a romance, how to distinguish differing points of view, how character growth arcs impact the plot of the romance, and more.

    For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/

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    1 hr
  • Episode 251 - Jeff and Laura Q&A
    Nov 18 2024

    In this episode, Jeff and Laura come together for a Q&A. Questions from the Dialoggers included: ---How do you keep track of everything for long, complex stories with elaborate world building?

    ---How do you make a novel's opening scene engaging while also needing to establish 'the new world'?

    ---Considering how expensive audio books are to produce, at what point should an indie author jump on it?

    ---What are some good tactics on how to improve your prose and more clearly find your voice?

    ---How do you make necessary transition scenes interesting without changing the plot?

    ---I want to take part in promotions/giveaways that help build my email list and give me reviews, but I have my books in KDP select which means I'm not supposed to give away free books. Do I take my books out of KU? Thoughts on which one would be more beneficial? Is it just unheard of that new authors don't have their books in KDP select?

    ---How is a book description different from a blurb? I'm struggling with this because I feel like I just nailed the blurb, but now I need book descriptions for when I have my book in a promotion. I looked up the difference so I'm familiar with the definition of a book description, but are there tips for writing one to make it different from the blurb?

    ---Can you offer titles similar to The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy by Douglas Adams and TV shows similar to Nobody Wants This? The more, the merrier. I haven't laughed this much in years! Love it!

    ---Any tips on summarizing the passage of time in between conversations. I generally handle the passage of time by changing scenes, but in certain examples I would end up with rather small scenes. Situations I have run into in the past follow the pattern: start with a conversation, summarize a non-trivial activity that would take too long to relay in real time, then end with another conversation.

    For more on the craft of writing or to get coaching, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/

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    2 hrs and 6 mins
  • Episode 250 - Deep Perspective and the Middle of Your Story - Office Hours with JP
    Nov 11 2024

    In this episode, Dialogue Doctor Coach JP Rindfleisch IX holds Office Hours with three authors. Office Hours are times when authors and hangout with a Dialogue Doctor Coach and ask questions they have. In this episode, JP and that authors discuss what to do when the middle of your book starts to fade, how do you keep someone interested in your character as you build out the character's problem overtime, ways to provide depth of perspective, and more.

    For more on writing or to book a coaching session with JP, come to https://dialoguedoctor.com/

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    1 hr and 18 mins
  • Episode 249 - Structuring Dialogue and Emotional Flow with Dillon Mesquitta
    Nov 4 2024

    In this episode, Jeff sits down with author Dillon Mesquitta to talk about Dillon's work in progress. They discuss the structure of Dillon's dialogue and look at the emotional flow of Dillon's characters.

    For more on the craft of writing, go to https://dialoguedoctor.com/

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    1 hr and 23 mins